I like the way you have used feedback to improve your presentation. Well done! I like that you have added captions to explain some of the features of your baby buggy. Perhaps to improve your post you could tell your audience briefly what the story of Oscar was about and why you think your design will get Oscar what he is seeking.
What do you think about Naomi's comment? I wonder if this pram is going to fit in the car? It looks to me as if Oscar put a small trailer on the back he could pull Mum down to the coffee shop behind him!
Hi Rhys That's a cool looking Google drawing! Does the buggy fly? I can't see any wheels on it? Oscar must be be pretty clever, being able to operate his buggy by himself!
Thtas a cool drawing Rhys, sounds like you've got the engine running perfectly. Oscar looks really pleased thar he is driving it himself.
ReplyDeleteI like the buggy you have made Rhys. I wonder if Lincoln would like to ride in it? Though might be too big.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used feedback to improve your presentation. Well done! I like that you have added captions to explain some of the features of your baby buggy.
Perhaps to improve your post you could tell your audience briefly what the story of Oscar was about and why you think your design will get Oscar what he is seeking.
What do you think about Naomi's comment? I wonder if this pram is going to fit in the car? It looks to me as if Oscar put a small trailer on the back he could pull Mum down to the coffee shop behind him!
It is a very creative solution to Oscars problem.
Mrs H
Hi Rhys
ReplyDeleteThat's a cool looking Google drawing! Does the buggy fly? I can't see any wheels on it? Oscar must be be pretty clever, being able to operate his buggy by himself!
The buggy hovers. Air is coming out the bottom to make it hover.
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